by *~*Soldier Lover*~* Feb 19, 2005
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Everybody has different pieces of themselves. |
by Robert
this was very heart felt but seemed more like a essay rather then a poem read Pride or Profit you will see the difference and tell me what you think |
by Dorotea©
Wow, beautiful! You have a lot of imagination, and I really loved this poem because it's so different from other poems and so creative. And it's really honest too! What can I say? 5/5 for this poem, I loved it, u have a lot of talent! |
I like this piece very much. It is very true in so many aspects. You seem much older than 15. Make sure to follow your own advice here, its good stuff. |
by Aubrey
nicely writen! nice flow!!! 8/5 |
by Heathergirl
GREAT POEM, I LIKED IT A LOT... I GIVE YOU A 5/5 |