this is a great poem! I'm a fan of your work, I really like this. you should see of you could have a second part, maybe a continuation, the next part of the story? it feels unfinished a little when you read it. very good on what you've got!! 5/5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

aw..!!! so sad, so good. i was in aw, and my eyes glistened :-) great poem!
-K