I'm Sorry

by Krete   Feb 19, 2005


I'm afraid to type it in,
this task I know I must,
this apology selfish thing,
my suicide lust.

I'm so tired,
at times so cold,
this coffee work wired,
my life to take bold.

A new rendition,
high above the sky,
crying near my savior,
wanting nothing else accept to cry.

Canon plays so softly,
it tares a way to cries,
it begins to last a moment,
instead it lasts lives.

Its so very cold,
Its so terribly bad,
But suicide,
Its my only happy glad.

I want to go,
i need to rest,
please forgive me,
i failed your test.

I just can't stand this shadow,
this self made shroud of guilt.
Its my deepest source,
the handle of my hilt.

I want to go away,
I can't write anymore,
this sickness thing, my life,
Its broken me the more.

I'm Sorry.
I will be no More.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Luke

    great poem k-rete. put some more up an dont kill yourself. or ill be disappointed in you. peace. -Luke

  • 19 years ago

    by «_ĀÐdï©+ïØñ¯»

    i like this though its sad.. good job.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lushed

    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww krete!
    i absolutly ADORE all of your work.
    i really hope youre okay...

    the second stanza was breathtaking...
    youre choice of words is just so.... well. poetic. (i wonder why.. lol. sorry i couldnt find the word)

    i really hope you write more soon!!!
    <3 jenny

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Hey, I hope you're okay. I really hope so. Sorry I haven't e-mailed in awhile.. I'll e-mail you right now!!! :-)

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Omg, that was amazing!!!!!!! I hope you didn't commit suicide, or don't, but I can't help but notice this poem is pretty old. That was soo beatiful though. I'm sorry if you feel sad!! I really am!!

    I hope you feel better.

    ~Sierra

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