thats was really good. Keep up the great work!(if you would would you read some of my work also?) thanks and i'd appreciate it

katelyn

Suidide is not the answer for problems...Try to fight your away problems away...Heaven,hell..everything is within us only...its the way,you look at things makes the difference...Hope you feel better.. .take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>

Sweetie, if this poem is real please dont go. You've helped me more than anyone else on this site and i could never bare to see you go. I hardly even know you but i have so much love and respect for you already. So please dont go. Your life is too beautiful to let die.
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Please contact me and we'll talk.
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-A

Well damn, I hope that is not how you truly feel....you are amazing!! Take Care!

Omg, that was amazing!!!!!!! I hope you didn't commit suicide, or don't, but I can't help but notice this poem is pretty old. That was soo beatiful though. I'm sorry if you feel sad!! I really am!!

I hope you feel better.

~Sierra

Hey, I hope you're okay. I really hope so. Sorry I haven't e-mailed in awhile.. I'll e-mail you right now!!! :-)

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww krete!
i absolutly ADORE all of your work.
i really hope youre okay...

the second stanza was breathtaking...
youre choice of words is just so.... well. poetic. (i wonder why.. lol. sorry i couldnt find the word)

i really hope you write more soon!!!
<3 jenny

i like this though its sad.. good job.

great poem k-rete. put some more up an dont kill yourself. or ill be disappointed in you. peace. -Luke