GREAT METAPHORE! finally someone who uses metaphores. I like how you used the different parts of dieing to show that your depressed.

That Metaphore was one of the best i have read hun. definately one of your best, you should put it on your featured list, i think it is an awesome poem. I loved every word of it.

Five/Five wicked poem!

good and sad!

~lil slam~ thanks for the comment~