Save me~!!!~

by xxangelchicxx2000   Feb 19, 2005


Holding on to dear life
Trying to stay alive
I was wondering about you
Mostly that where were you?
You said that you would be here
So where are you now?
I am in pain
While darkness prevails
Save me
While you can
Pretty soon you won’t have
Nothing to save
I am dying inside
Even if I don’t look it
You would see it
If you were here
But you are not
So what’s the point?

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  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    thanks always open to suggestions~!!~

  • 19 years ago

    by Marie

    Another good poem but a comment. on the line that reads "So now where are you?" Maybe put it So where are you now? I think it just adds a little angerish tone or at least more tone to it! Keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    nice job!! keep up the great work!! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Rashelle

    Good job!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    great poem!

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