Comments : Ease the Pain

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Thank you everyone who has commented on this poem or given it a vote.

    I like to thank you for reading this poem, it is about my stomach problems that i will have the rest of my life and the pills i take to try and control them, i wrote it while i was sick in the bathroom.

    I hope you enjoyed the read.

  • 19 years ago

    by Noelle k.

    i like this poem you dont need meat anyway save them animals! :P

  • 19 years ago

    by Noelle k.

    hope u feel better

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    ~such a creative poem~

    so when i feel sick and lonely in the nights
    i reach for my pen and pad instead of the knife

    I'm trying to figure out what it's like to ease this pain
    I'm Trying to figure out what it's like to Seize the Day.

    I GOT TO SAY I LOVE THOSE LINES SO VERY MUCH FOR ALL THE RELATION THEY HOLD WITH ME...I AM SO VERY GLAD YOU ARE TRYING TO MOVE ON FROM WHATEVER IT IS THAT HURTS YOU/CAUSES YOU SO MUCH PAIN...I BELIEVE IN YOU:) SUCH A SHORT POEM CAPTURING SO MANY EMOTIONS...GET WELL SOON SWEETHEART!

    God Bless
    love HMC

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    ps...5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Great poem very emotional! I hope you get and feel better soon! Good write very very good, loved it and may God be with you always:)
    Tash
    xoxox

  • 19 years ago

    by Kristen

    Anouther amazing poem. I kinda went through that... long story short, wrote a poem, and two girls i barly knew told the school shrink... they kept on asking whats wrong, and asking to see my wrists even though i never cut... it was sad in a funny way how they kept on asking and guessing what was wrong with me... great poem, i love your poetry!

  • 19 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    wow, i really liked this one.......your poems are great, and i really enjoy reading them, keep it up =)........thanks for all your suggestions.......i made some changes to "my best friend", but i dunno if i like them or not........if you get a chance, let me know what you think........thanks hun......take care, and i wish you and heather the best of luck......laterzzz

    -brittnay- ((5/5))

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    I like the way it ends specially...very good work...sorry life isn't fair...no, really, I am... I can relate to this...sigh......

    xxx