thats a real touching poem keep it up
*plz vote on mine*

~some really beautiful lines in poem :

It was destined to begin but never made to last.
A cry in the night means sun when you wake.
I take what I give and I give what I take.
~ and ~
A memory faded leaving space for a thought.
The sun promised to rise but I guess it forgot.

very nice poem, deserves to be top in ranks, if not badly voted. this poem is something like amazing! the lines i mentioned above were really superb.
~take care, 5! always believe in love, ~amit

"A memory faded leaving space for a thought.
The sun promised to rise but I guess it forgot."

That stanza is beyond words....superb! Pure literary brilliance~Holly