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  • 17 years ago

    by LiNa

    Rolo, love your poems . i mean LOVE.you are such a good writter,they touch me in alot of ways.

  • 17 years ago

    by Emily

    This is wonderful

  • 17 years ago

    by MiZz UnD3RSTUdD

    Omg d@T w@s d@ shiit~!~ :)

  • 17 years ago

    by IsisLyubov

    That waz one of the best poems i have ever heard... dat waz and awsome poem... continue your good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Only just come across your poem.. It's very well written, and full of knowledge of the depth of despair. Well done. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Emma

    I really liked this poem... i think alot of different people can relate to it. not just one select group:)

  • 17 years ago

    by heartbrk1

    So true what is the point when yer dead

  • 17 years ago

    by DeafeningSilence

    This is one of my favorite.
    I love it. You did a good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Diana Hughes

    Amazing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Ana(Angel)

    Wow.
    I love it.

    But knowing gloom for long?

    Im not one to tell you to "dont worry man, be happy!"

    Im here to say...

    Death is a part of life...

    Even a living one...

    and until your hearts stops beating..

    You can rest in some comfort..

    That youre not fully dead.

    Good poem though.

    I really do like it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenna

    One of the best poems ive evr read, i can really feel the passion...the way u word it is beautiful...i can relate to this poem in evry way.

    keep up the good work.

    i kno often times i write a poem by the mood im in. so if u wernt feeling so happy when u wrote this poem...i hope it changed

    -jenna

  • 17 years ago

    by Mihaela

    This poem is great.Im spechlless....Congratulations!!Dont stop writing poems cause you're the best!Keep on the good work.. xXx

  • 17 years ago

    by sweet_rebellion

    Wow very good poem. Great expression. Keep writing!! You're very talented!!

    sweet_rebellion

  • 17 years ago

    by Beautifully Broken

    Excellent poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren

    Omg! this is fantastic! so moving

  • 17 years ago

    by Cassi

    ..I know how ya feel.

  • 17 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    I really really liked this poem. The ending was very strong.

  • 17 years ago

    by DeadandBleeding

    This is really good, i especially like the last stanza, so powerful. I can totally relate to this.

  • 17 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    That was awfully wonderful...you are seriosuly talented.It's kinda like reading a really good put you just cant put down...soryy if all these comments are freaking you out.You're a really good poet...I especially like this poem.Ok,well,ttyl.

    *A

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    ' "Too late" came and passed...
    and, of me, nothing more
    I wrote my own ending,
    and I shut my own door... '

    i really liked it... good work....