Totally brilliant......no need to say no more!

Truly touching =)
I'm adding you to my fav already.

"Too late" came and passed...
and, of me, nothing more
I wrote my own ending,
and I shut my own door...

This stanza meant something to me, Idk why, probably because I stopped a while after reading it & read it once again.

Even though the title isn't new, it attracted me in a way..
I love the poem & your work overall
keep that up

Wow, thats great. I felt this way many times in my life, and you are right about you being in a fight with yourself. If your mind could just let go of all the "bad" stuff, it probably wouldnt be so difficult. I understand. Best wishes to you.

Excellent poem! =] good word choice

Thats amazing. Very well written and so true. kinda in awe.lol 5/5

Wow rolo, another amazing read. i have a poem similar to this 1 bit it doesnt capture things in the same way,i love your vauge yet detailed writing, you are clearly an experienced poet

I know exactly how you feel... good work

Glad I found this poem. Very strong, emotionally. Look doward to reading your other poems.

Glad I found this poem. Very strong, emotionally. I Look foward to reading your other poems.

Wow i loved the ending

Wow. This is one of the best poems I've ever read

I would love for you to read your poem on my radio show by phone. If interested email me, thanks !

Good one ma'am,
I can relate it to myself any given day

I'm already dead! i like this poem! :)

I like it is very good keep up the work and keep up the heart

This is amazing. I love how often times when I'm writing I can't get it out on paper. So I go read others work and find exactly what I feel. Keep working your great!

This is amazing. I love how often times when I'm writing I can't get it out on paper. So I go read others work and find exactly what I feel. Keep working your great!

This is a wonderful poem. I find myself more and more depressed and yet I somehow manage to put a smile on my face. My wife and son have no idea the pressure life can sometimes put on me and what's really sad is that they are so wrapped up in themselves that they don't notice anything. I like this poem it speaks to me. I sometimes feel like a full glass of water that one more drip in my life will send me over the edge.

Wow this poem is more than amazing! I'm jealous I didn't write it myself :) You are a great writer keep it up ;)

WOW VERY DEEP WHOA LOVE IT