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  • 12 years ago

    by ERS

    I absolutely love your poem!

  • 12 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    Oh wow im sorry for your pain dont let life get you down though

  • 12 years ago

    by Reyna

    This is a powerful poem. thanks for sharing it your really talented 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Amber

    Soo sad

  • 12 years ago

    by Glenn G

    You must know me you wrote my biography. Good job

  • 12 years ago

    by lyndsey

    That was amazing. your a really talented person.

  • 12 years ago

    by LoVerSLaND

    You wrote about myself. 5/5. I fully understood everything.

  • 12 years ago

    by Rebecca Bentley

    I absolutely love this poem. I feel I can relate to it 100% you are very very talented x

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachel

    Very well done ,i hope you continue to write poetry on real feeling & emotion.

  • 12 years ago

    by Elizabeth

    This was AMAZING!!!!!!!! i feel like this all the time you are really good!

  • 12 years ago

    by mydarkness13

    Great poem :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Sean Ooi

    Great poem but in stanza 8 I thought that the tune went a little rocky for readers. Other than that it is quite good

  • 12 years ago

    by amber

    Thas good a lil intense tho....

  • 12 years ago

    by Paris

    Wow

  • 12 years ago

    by Paris

    Wow

  • 12 years ago

    by sirknak

    I loved everything about this

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    The point lies within your victory. Before you proceed, weigh the end.

  • 12 years ago

    by Bella

    This is really fantastic! i was so moved, thank you it was a pleasure reading it! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Bella

    This is really fantastic! i was so moved, thank you it was a pleasure reading it! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by charmedwitch

    I wouldn't like to live with out you but life goes on and i have to move on.

    -I don't know I wanna add that in the end because I know that's what life is...