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  • 12 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    Love it

  • 12 years ago

    by gorgeous girl

    This is actually really deep and very well penned... Nice work!

  • 12 years ago

    by lillie

    Amazing work!!

  • 12 years ago

    by lillie

    Amazing work!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Someone Invisible

    Amazin'

  • 12 years ago

    by jamie25

    Wow this was amazing, i truly loved it. great flow to it also. keep up the good work

  • 11 years ago

    by DeafBeats

    Enjoyed the concept :] Thanks for sharing.

  • 11 years ago

    by Silentium

    Very nice

  • 11 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This is really good

  • 11 years ago

    by Areeba Hashmi

    Truly fantastic....simply no words to describe its just out of the world... The rhyming the simplicity everything's very well managed..!!

  • 11 years ago

    by tainted melody

    Fantastic fluidity. Each line got you more engrossed in the next. Very powerful and a pleasure to read!

  • 11 years ago

    by Olivia

    Great job, I understand the feeling...

  • 11 years ago

    by ilgrl

    Very well done .. those words are exactly how I feel sometimes

  • 11 years ago

    by lexi

    This was very good, i loved the rythmn keep up the good work!:) and if you could check out my poems im new! thanks :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessica

    Your very hurt & with that your very talented.

  • 11 years ago

    by Alessandra

    This is the best poem I have ever read.

  • 11 years ago

    by Antonio

    I feel your pain brotha'...good job.

  • 11 years ago

    by ZinaZonic

    Holy moly!! This is amazing! One of the best I've read :) rated 5 for sure :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Bella

    Wow

  • 11 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    This poem is like you giving words to my girlfriend's feelings. She would appreciate it, because words do not come easily to her. It is nice to be reading some of your words again.