Me And My Knife
by brett Feb 19, 2005
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Just me and my knife sit alone once again, lost in this world thats to hard to win, should i kill myself and commit this sin??, or should i leave my smile on thats only pretend?, so many thoughts racing all through my head, but the only one i here is do it your better off dead, the thoughts leaving me so confused, as i sit holding my knife that i have once used, but will this time be the last??, will i finally make my last slash??, once again the thoughts start racing, here i go my knife starts pacing, once again my blood hits the ground,my mind screams but i make not a sound, as my blood starts to run dry, i sit and wonder will this time i die? |
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19 years ago
Hey Brett,
Thass a really good poem..your very talneted.!..5/5
An Hang in there babe, i know juss want your goin through...ive been there and i guess i still am inna alot of ways..But life does get better...nd you may not realize it now...but trust me hun, it does..There is so much more to live for. and im sure there are ppl family,nd friends that would be really up-set if you went through with killin yaself..and it took me bout a good 3 ta 4 years to realize this. So juss give yourself a chance. Kay Babe, I have a poem thass called my note..and its bout me killin myself and cuttin...Check it out sometime...It may help you to realize that your not alone...kay babe...juss hang in there...!
Again, Very good poem..!
:.* Much Love *.:
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19 years ago
by Red Charm
Hey totally beautiful. I'd like to talk with you sometime.
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19 years ago
by alyssa
wow this is a really good poem if its true and do thinksuicidal you can email me any time you want i know i dont know you and you dont know me but im a good listener.
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19 years ago
by Jenny89_17
this poem says it all keep writing
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19 years ago
by stephalee
wow this is really good u shudnt kill urself but this is really good!! keep it up im giving it a 5
