~good one, keep writing. conveying poem, expressive writing.
~take care, 5! always believe in love, ~amit

Great job and beautifully written. lol

slap him on the head and tell him not to be so blind....or say this to him "read my lips" then kiss him

i love this poem it so retates to me. i give it a 5!!! keep up the good work.

OmG i lOvE the poem..its kinda like what i'm going thro..good job <3

Beautiful, nice, and good description and conveying of feelings. Check out some of my poems when you get the chance. Check out some of my featured poems too...if u can!

THAT'S REALLY GOOD AND EXACTLY MY SITUATION!! PLEASE COMMENT AND VOTE MY POEMS. THANKS
..XOXO..

I like it, itreminds me of someone i know...