I like the idea, very good, and original x

Oh, wow, Rashelle, this is beautiful. It's original, it's sweet, it's caring, it's emotional...I love it. You rhyme well, and it doesn't seem forced. Your rhythm isn't too bad either.
Keep up the good work, sweetie.

xoxZoezxox

cute cute cute lol :)
Love you!

Great rhyming, great flow. Great message..I just loved everything about this. I give you an excellent. The lines were great in here...just awesome!

omg, tht was such a sweet poem, awww!!! thnx sooooo much for the comment

hey this poem is great! very cleverly written and original and flows in a different way to the usual. Keep writing its so nice I'll be back 2 see if you've written any more.

Take care

Dianna

~ wow! lovely poem, amazing write
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

Awesome poem! It's similar to one of mine called I'll Never Stop Loving You. Keep it up! Take care!
-Conner

its not your poem i'm just not really into love poems

Hey, i liked this poem. Keep it up, nice work. If you have the chance, I would appreciate it if you could read my new poem “I know that she loves me” and plz. Comment and rate it, I would appreciate it. Thanx.

dats sweet i luved ur poem is good liked ur comments

aww this is a really cute poem!! LOVE it!! nicely written..keep it up!! :)

this is a beautiful poem, I'm a sucker for sweet love poems, 5/5
thanx for your comment!!
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

WOW. i really really really like this. it is so sweet. REALLY well written. Keep upp the good work
Paula

that was a very cute poem, i loved it good job, please rate and comment mine 2

i really liked this poem, keep it up xxxx

this is so cute i love it! great job keep it up! and thanx for you comment it was awhile ago but i'm not sure i ever returned the favor...but i really like your stuff so i'm definetely going to read more when i get the chance:)
xxxChristinaxxx