Heather, You're so right. A lot of people rely on drugs or alcohol they try to say this helps their problems. But so wrong. I don't even like to take Dr. medication but sometimes as you get older you have to. I'm not a drinker but every now and then like Xmas or New Year'sor a special occasion, I will take a sociable drink. But I thank God each day my life is stable, true I have problems like every one else but I've learnt to deal with these the best I can. Heather, great poem so true. Hugs to ya, Love ya bunches Ann

this is a sad poem. well written and very true of this generation.
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

i don't think it is at all ofencive and i agree, people are wasting away there lives. I like this poem because it's honest and the best poems come from the heart. Good work!

I don't find it offensive at all (I don't do drug's, but I drink with my friends frequently)! You put a very positive and powerful message out there. I think anyone who does find it offensive are the one's who are addicted and probably need intervention of some sort! Anyway, enough about that...great job as always~Holly

I am too above all the drinking and drugs and throwing away of lives but 1st of all it's not always sumones fault if they are depressed, I'm sure you know that though, but anyways you shouldn't keep away from things like that because of "god" you should for yourself if u want to succeed, there is absolutely no proof that a God of the sorts exists, others follow by what they call blind faith, but what has blindness and ignorance every gotten us in this world besides false comfort and obscured truth

wow thats an amazin peom !!!!!! i didnt find it offensive!!!!! if some one do grugs and drink alchole they need help be4 its too late!!!! i hv been drank only ones and it was stupid off me but i learnt from my mistkes soo yeah hunzz it was a great job i loved it and i love yaa hehehe:P
take careeeeeee
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another great poem. i don't see how anyone would get offened tho, it's not something i see as offensive. but anyways, i gave it a five.

For some it would seem to be offensive to others a masterpiece that captures what is happening. And to me I find it interesing and with an undercurrent of warning for those who do this.