Kewl poem hun :D keep writing, you are getting there, we can al see it :D:D:D *Huggles* lol xxxxxxxxxx i love you!

Thanku hunni xxx

yeah i agree, oliver is right.....we can all see how much your improving! great write gurl! love you
jescelle

I love this poem, especially the last verse. The fact that It's so hopeful all the way through, yet left with a question is something that I myself and others I'm sure have felt at some point. I love it.
Take care of yourself hun.
Always here, You're in my prayers.
All my love,
Laura.

Thanku every1 it really means a lot xxx

Damn, Damn, damn!! I loved this, I mean like fell head over heels in love with this poem! woooooow............wooooww.......damn damn damn!! God girl! You're soo good! You've been added to my favories!!

Can you read my new poem? Kill the Beating Heart. That's the title! I'd love to keep in touch, and I've sent you a private message yesterday, but you never responded, so I'll try again later. Take care!!!

~Sierra