i like how you put this poem, wow must have been hard with all the rage and then finding out that you would just get weaker but hey don't give up there your still great..... Laura101 email ma sometimes at.... killredgummybear@hotmail.com

Your poems are all about fighting. Seems as though that's your true love. In this one you talk about how you *had been* a kickboxer. Do u not do it anymore?

that was a good poem, thanx for the comment on mine

Nice poems but you could make them better by writing them in poem form instead of paragraph form coz when you write it as a paragraph it is just like you voicing your opinion. and you want your opinion voiced but not like a paper for an english class.

This is really beautiful poem, but you need to descibe more deeply how u feels.