oh god i understand that! love is soooo confusing and complex. This is a good representation of your feelings, you should be proud of this poem!

wonderful poem!

Heather, Once again a great poem from a great heart. Beautiful job. love ya bunches, Ann

I love when I write a poem and my feelings are so cluttered and confusing. When I read it a few times, my thoughts usually straighten out! This is beautifully written! I love the idea of 2 broken hearts melting into one...Holly

this poem makes me think of sumthing in my own life, and thanx 4 commenting but It deffinately is not that I don't believe in the religious God because I'm a teenager..in fact i cannot stand teenagers, I know that there is some force that revolves in this earth I just believe that religion is something created by man to fill the vacancy in their lives and fear of the unknown, Its so much easier to rely on a higher power when you are weak, but all that does is either convince sumone further of this power when really it was themselves that solved their problems making them unnecesarilly dependent, or it furthers ignorance and continues the pointless cycle of using your energy on something that will ultimately get you no where in life

great poem it made me think abt smethings :D!!!!!
peaceeee

Heather your work is so well written its hard to belive you'r only 16 "I wish i could write the way you do" lol
Dave......

aww i really really like this one. at first i really didn't understand it, then i read that thing that you posted at the end. great work, Heather.

~ lovely write, heather
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit