Wow! very nice job on this one! I don't know much about writing songs, but this was awesome! *is speechless*

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nice job. not the kind of song i'd listen too but it was well written.

This poem was very well written with a lot of emotion behind it. I liked it; definately a song I'd listen to. Nicely done. Kudos.