by Josh Sowiecki Feb 20, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
I don't ever want to see you cry and I don't ever want to say good-bye but there are things that you should know. Please lisin and don't let go. I'm a man of insecurities, a man of doubt. No one has ever seen what I'm all about. They look past the good just to see the bad, they look past the things I never had.I didn't have a home or parents who cared, I was beat everyday, broken and scared. I was state raised but home grown, I had to grow up fast i was all alone. I took the beatings, the drinking the leaving. I took all the lies and deceiving. I left home scared I was only a boy, I never seen love hope or joy. So for me to give or receive any was hard because all of my life I was treated with disregard. I wanted to know love, to know true bliss. You showed me all these things with just one kiss. |
by Liz
wow i feel for u i love ur poem i can really tell there come from the heart hey if u ever want to talk i am here,i enjoy reading ur poems there so ture please read my poems |
by GoodMorning
im gonna cry......definitely a 5 |
i do agree with most people that you should consider the lines and not just a big paragraph! but anyways that was an awsome poem and i could tell that it was coming from your heart! way to GO!! keep them coming |
by Kayla
I really like your poems, they are really great and they relate me particularly |
by Aitch
awesome and well written, 5 |