by Josh Sowiecki Feb 20, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
In these eyes of ice there's warmth. |
hey baby. i like this poem alot. i like all of your poetry. I love how u write very much. u have alot more good ones u could put on here. this one was cool cuz it doesnt rhyme. thats what makes it so unique. not all poetry needs to rhyme. i love u baby. |
I was told when I was locked up I should write a poem that didn't rhyme so this is what I came up with. ~smile someone loves you~ |
by *Sherrie*
Aahhh thats so sweet good work hun... |
I liked the semi-repitition in this ... it gave it a sense of direction in some peculiar way. |