I liked the semi-repitition in this ... it gave it a sense of direction in some peculiar way.

"Through these eyes you're perfect, if only to me." - This sealed the deal for me :D, a total relentless love no matter what. Awesome poem.

--;;Kalah

Aahhh thats so sweet good work hun...

I was told when I was locked up I should write a poem that didn't rhyme so this is what I came up with. ~smile someone loves you~

hey baby. i like this poem alot. i like all of your poetry. I love how u write very much. u have alot more good ones u could put on here. this one was cool cuz it doesnt rhyme. thats what makes it so unique. not all poetry needs to rhyme. i love u baby.