hi jaime
u know...it actually makes alot of sense.....i am in the exact same situation....i mean....the words really match it...
and i hope ur always happy
love and take care
gunjan

this poem is so good, great, extrodinary, magnificent and lots of other big words lol anyways it does make sence I understand it just fine and i don't think u should make fun of ur poems when there this good k it's not nice I think this poem deserves a 5 nothin less for sure k
love ya and SMILE
Nate

I absolutely love it..you are an excellent poetry writer. Keep at it and you get even more better. Everyone's life is kind of at that point sometimes where it is confusing..believe me i know and to write peotry and stuff is my escape. Keep at it and don't give up.
jenn.

HEY I REALLY THINK IT MAKES SENCE IF YOU ASK ME GREAT JOB IF U GET A CHANCE CHECK OUT SOME OF MINE

I like it. I've kinda been in a situation like that when i was hurting some1 aswell as myself! It sucks i know. Great work.