Bro great work!! Lots of emotion and well written. Honestly for me your really a good writter!!! 5/5 =) |
I get a sense of "lovers possession" from this =D It's marvellous. The flow was excellent and each word fitted the context to a tee. Well done! |
by Megin
hey..thanx for the comment! this poem is really cute! i gave u a 5/5!!! keep it real |
Hey its me again! Sittin in 4th hour bored off my @$$. Just reading your stuff. Put more on here. You have alot of good work hon. |
by Amit
~ lovely poem, enjoyed |
awww how sweet, you seem to really love her!! this was great, 5/5 |
by Brittney
Josh i just wanted to let you know that this poem is excellent!! keep up the good work |
aww baby i love u so much! im glad this poem was rated number one yesterday! lots of exposure for my baby boy. thanx for all the comments on my poems...that one poem was about u hon...who else would it be about?? baby im so tired. beverly kept me up ALL night. i wanted to go to your house and sleep next to you so bad! i was gonna call u this mornin and ask if i could come over but i knew u were sleepin. i talk to u in a couple hours hon! i love you! |
aww baby i love u so much! im glad this poem was rated number one yesterday! lots of exposure for my baby boy. thanx for all the comments on my poems...that one poem was about u hon...who else would it be about?? baby im so tired. beverly kept me up ALL night. i wanted to go to your house and sleep next to you so bad! i was gonna call u this mornin and ask if i could come over but i knew u were sleepin. i talk to u in a couple hours hon! i love you! |
by Steven
omg dude i feel the same =/ muy |
by kyla
good job=) this is really sweet...too bad not all guys are like that and realize theyre lucky to have what they have=D |
by Niloufar
that is a really good poem!! thanks for the comment on my poem!! =) made me feel a lot better!! |
yea, it doe shave a nice flow. Good job. Niiiiice dude, good. If you have the chance, I would appreciate it if you could read my new poem “I know that she loves me†and plz. Comment and rate it, I would appreciate it. Thanx. |
Whoa this is hella good. This is like EXACTLY what me and my ex are goin through, her b/f is a prick and she always comes to me for comfort! I'm still shocked...that's weird! any way 5/5 from me |
by cole
hey its cole yeah this is a really great one.... i think mine wasnt so good becasue i really just started to come in touch with my poetry and i dont know.... read some more of mine though |
by Keith
Nice work guy! Real deep, i thought, thanks for your comment on The Samaritan Soldier! gave you a 5/5 |
by GoodMorning
wow, that is a great poem i gave it a five =).....i'd like it if you could check some of my poems out and comment im new at this poetry thing and im open to any and all suggestions, keep on writin' i enjoy your poems! |
by RebeccaPower
so cute ... love it! very fantabulous!! |
by StRaWbEeRy
Great Poem. I love it. I would give that a 10. Keep up the good work! |
by Lynssey
That poem is Bad @$$ keep it up Broha~~ |