Aww... I love you! Even though my love is of no comparison to God's... Anyway, it wasn't corny. I have spells like that constantly. Good Job.

~Ciao Lipton

Great poem.

Sorry for how short my earlier comment was. I was running out of time.
Anyway I really do love this poem and it isn't corney. actually I think it is a wonderful picture that you have painted with words. Truly a work of honest art. ~lizzie~