Hello Ann,
I read your pome,and i am telling you that its so sweet and felt like it was so true,this part was my fav :

I've never been so in love
Never been in this deep before
But when I'm with you
My heart keeps begging for more

it was so emotional,lovely story ; )

Keep Writing mate,
Peace,
Darla

Heyy awesome poem!! i really like it! greattt job! i gave it a 5!!

xX-Katherine-Xx