Failing

But you see, you only fail when you give up and decide that you are done trying which is something you wouldn't do. You are too strong for that. Hold on for your life, as tight as you can, hold fast and hard because this is something worth fighting for with everything part of you being. This poem was definately an insight into you as a person which I enjoyed. I have loved to read your poems and hear your writer's voice flowing through the words.

-Tainted Mikochan

It really is a good poem, and I think most people will feel like that. I know I do pretty much at the moment. Makes me wonder, though, just what are you failing at or maybe that's just for readers to interperate.

You painted a very nice clear picture of how your feeling! I liked it cause I can relate.... You might want to add maybe somthing more in depth about why your feeling this... Like give it a little more in depth look on this subject and it will be a awesome read!! Great work you are a great writter!

eh i didnt really like this poem. it just didnt really flow to me. nothing really rhymed and i dunno 3/5

I liked this one...a bit repetative towards the end which kind of let people know what was comming but other then that...nice job...luv yas mwah

-kayla-