Lose Myself

by UM   Feb 20, 2005


There is a place where I lose myself...

Your hair: a cascading wave of shimmering black,
framing your face and rolling down your back.
Your eyes: shimmering pools, both dark and bright,
exuding patience and care, never spite.
Your cheeks: smooth and soft,
serving as pillars to hold your eyes aloft.
Your lips: able to contort into a tender smile,
or into a kiss, so versatile.
Your mind: a tool so keen,
honed sharp for someone only sixteen.
Your voice: a music to my ears,
a melodious sound to remember all my years.

A place that is yourself.

&copy Joshua Bryant Cole

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  • 18 years ago

    by struggling

    Wow, excellent poem. so heartfelt, awesome. every word seems perfectly chosen and placed. great. =D
    xoxoTasha

  • 19 years ago

    by oOXkonnXOo

    wow this poem is beautiful! you get a 5 from me. i love the way you described her!

    -jenn

  • 19 years ago

    by ¤©h€€®ƒüll¥♥©¥ñ!c@l¤

    Beautiful, I absolutly loved it. It made me smile. Great job and keep it up.

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    ~ nice and expressive, loved it
    ~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    WoW, the wording you use to describe her features almost make her seem like she is the perfect female<if there is such a thing> *ducks*.

    I really like this poem and it is what poetry is all about, this is an amazing poem and it was one of the best i have read.

    Five/Five

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