WoW, the wording you use to describe her features almost make her seem like she is the perfect female<if there is such a thing> *ducks*.

I really like this poem and it is what poetry is all about, this is an amazing poem and it was one of the best i have read.

Five/Five

~ nice and expressive, loved it
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

Beautiful, I absolutly loved it. It made me smile. Great job and keep it up.

wow this poem is beautiful! you get a 5 from me. i love the way you described her!

-jenn

Wow, excellent poem. so heartfelt, awesome. every word seems perfectly chosen and placed. great. =D
xoxoTasha