by Tainted Butterfly Feb 21, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
I am a bee |
by creasy
this is really good!! loved it!! nicely written!! thanks for the comment!! take care and keep up your nice writing!! :) |
by Rashelle
Well I LOVED IT.It was realy difrent i loved the first lines !It also had a great flow. |
by Marie
Awsome!!! way kool!!! keep it up!! |
by Eibutsina
This is clearly a brilliant poem - and has earned you my friend a spot on my personal faves list - I just found I could really relate to it - the first couple of lines were amazing! |