This is clearly a brilliant poem - and has earned you my friend a spot on my personal faves list - I just found I could really relate to it - the first couple of lines were amazing!

Awsome!!! way kool!!! keep it up!!
Marie

Well I LOVED IT.It was realy difrent i loved the first lines !It also had a great flow.

this is really good!! loved it!! nicely written!! thanks for the comment!! take care and keep up your nice writing!! :)