I really liked this poem, it flowed really nicely and it's sometimes to make blank verse flow nicely, keep it up!

Aww thats so sweet! I loved it. 5/5

Great poem that was moving!! I agree it flows nicely and it's an amazing piece of work!
Keep it up:)
Tash
xoxox
p.s thanks for your comment it means alot!!! Thanks again:)

~ sweet and lovely
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

that is really great, but at the same time a little sad....i gave it a 5 =)

wow wow... 5/5 =)

beautiful poem and writing so lovely!

hey... yet again a very well written poem, I really like this one, It's sad though.. lol. :D

i think that this poem is great. it's really sweet to care for her so much

Hey! This is really good! I love it sooo much! May I add you to my favorites? Check out some of my poems ok?!

5/5
Love Bunchez!
Mya

Very prettiful write :) So beautiful, yet so sad. Well done.

Take care of yourself.
ALl my love,
Laura.

such a sweet poem really well written but you could maybe set it out in paragraphs it was a little hard to follow
>>5/5<<
bec

Very well written sweet poem! You did an amazing job it was sad but flowed so well perfect poem! 5/5 Take Care! Brooke

wow that was really good. It gave me chills. I loved it!

wow! that is some really great writing
~keep it up~

Great poem! 5.0 I thought this poem was really cute and sweet! Keep it up!

Wonderful poem! I enjoyed reading it:)
~Line~