by Unrequited Feb 21, 2005
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
I’m now finished |
by Rolo
Absolutely heart wrenching in the most beautiful way. It was such a peaceful write, peaceful yet sad. Amazing job, I loved it. 5/5. |
truly touching...sorry about your mother....good thing you have your faith still to help get you through...well done doing it from her point of view. |
by Natalie84
Beautifully written! This is my favorite yet. I love how you calmed down such a sad event....but did it in a way as to not take away from HER. Your words flowed so perfectly and sent across your message which you probably needed within yourself....Very strong! Absolutely perfect!! Take Care and God Bless! :) 5/5 |
Wonderfuly well written, sad, and deep. Love it! |
Lovely poem about your mother, it's so perfect too...Sorry to hear that she has cancer, hope that you are ok??? You have so much talent, I love your poems. |