Hey, this is really good!...i'm sorri if this is true tho...itz really touching and makes ppl think of what they take for granted, i hope your alrite...Keep on writing and take care...you are an excellent writer!!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

yea It really makes me think.
I must agree your writing abilitys exelent, what I love in this poem is that you talk about things that really happen to people.

Very good job
-David