The day that you left me

by happy days   Feb 21, 2005


The day that you left me
Was the day I gave up
I lost all my feelings
Beliefs and my goal
My world seems so empty
Where nobody cares
A life full of pain,
Anger, despair
I’ve given up hoping
Wishing for joy
As I sit and watch life
Passing me by
I wish one day soon
I’d get my wings and fly
Fly to a world
Where everyone’s happy
Pains been forgotten
And people do listen
Yet I struggle through each day
By hiding inside where
No one can hurt me
Or find out the truth
My extraordinary friend
It may hurt you to hear but;
the day that you left me
was the day i stopped living

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  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    You have a lot of talent very well done!
    But also very sad!

  • 19 years ago

    by Marta

    wow. im blown away, that was simply amazing, so effective and very sad, i can feel like that at times too, well done, that was amazing :) xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by happy days

    thanks for commenting, it means alot, ill return the favour as soon as i get time xx

  • 19 years ago

    by ¤©h€€®ƒüll¥♥©¥ñ!c@l¤

    Wow, that was awesome! I'm sure many can realate. Great job on it, I really liked it. 5/5

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  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    very good poem :) i hope that you continue to write because you have a talent.

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