good job! i liked this poem..keep your head up <3 rate and comment some of mine! 5.0

very good, it made me feel tense like what was going to happen, very nice.

kept me on the edge of my seat...i loved this, a lil nerve wrecking and sad...btu its really good, i love you hun and i hope things are alright with you <3 you're so amazing xxxxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx