wow...very very sad..you have a talent

Thats good... sad though... your good... Read mine if you have time xx

that was a really great poem, u really have talent, great job!!! please rate and comment mine too.

it touches me keep up the good work ok?

good rhyming & overall good poem. gave u a 5.

wow this is such a great, strong, emotional and heartfelt poem!!! excellent work every pain filled line......... absolute genius lol my only complaint is you could set it out in paragrahs maybe its sorta hard to read but the actual poem...... great!! >>5/5<<
bec xXx

awww wow...that is so sad :( I hope you feel better sometime soon...keep writing <33 xxxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

HEY!!!i voted five times!!EXCELLENT!

aww so sweet and so sad but great poem!
xxxChristinaxxx

aww, :'( that was quite sad, really nice poem though, well done hun
keep up the good works ;)

That was awsome i loved it! deep too. Keep up the great writing.

~xxx~ *{Rachel}*