I'm hoping this isnt a true story...i thought i should post incase it was, the poem really touched me, but i just hope that you are actually alright.. xxx

God that is really good, I find your poems really easy to relate to and I love reading your work keep writing

I love this poem =) deserves more than a 5!! thanks for your comment and vote.. I meant a lot! take care

hey this is a reli sad story glad u lived thru it. this poem is reli well written and reli touchin. i can totally relate to it and most of ur others, ur on my faves bbz, keep writin and stay strong xxx

your poem is really touching...tankx 4 commenting on mine....hope your ok...*hugs* x)

Wow...this sounds like me..I took a bunch of pills once...but anyways... these are all really good...

xoxo Kayla

I find that alot of your poems relate to me in some sort of way .. which I love . I love the way you write everything flows so nicely together .
April~*

excellent.. you know you enspired soemthing for my next sad one... depressed one.. thanks so much!!! :)
much love
amanda

strong,powerful,has edge and gives off a powerful vibe... u keep ur head up and keep writing as well.

oooooh, give life a chance! it gets better! really it does!! good poem too! play with the words a little more.

So sad but nicely written
you have such a wonderfull way with words
if you need to talk you can aim me at :wishforpain
once again good job 5/5

Good job, I like this one alot...5/5
Ash

Wow, my boyfriend has done the same for me... i love it 5/5