by Toni Feb 21, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Shout at me, scream at me |
by Toni
thanku hun! xx |
by deadnalone
it does, its kool, i like the way u switched the order of the couplets. v kool. |
by Toni
Thanku all.. x |
i agree with Distant Fate, that sounds like a good title for it, Greaet poem still hun, keep up the writing, love you xxx |
by Just Sierra
Its excellent! Lol, I do that sometimes, hug my knees and rock to and fro even when I'm not sad, lol. Same for you two! If you need to talk, I'm here!! This poem was fantastic! It may not be one of your best, but it doesn't change the fact that you write fabulous poems!! |