The morbid kiss

by Unrequited   Feb 21, 2005


Memories erase
feelings of haste
the obstacles we face

waste away
the bodies decay
soft rain of yesterday

spyders crawl
when darkness falls
tear down the walls

watch the moon
pain will come soon
a caterpillar’s cocoon

angels arise
a mad man’s disguise
the victims that die

my body aching
a child waking
my love for the taking

pay the price
take my life
end it with a knife

tears fall down
a baby’s frown
take off the crown

ask me why
must we die
please do not cry

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  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Not one of your best, but excellent rhyming...and it's something different but with the "spyders" still so yeah...I like it :)

    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Unrequited

    well, i don't think "spyders" is a correct spelling at all, but i like it and i think it puts a nice "personal touch" to my poems that include this word. I probably have 10 or so poems that include "spyders"... anyway, thanks for the comment!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    Good poem... sorry, I usually have more to say in reviews- but I have nothing else to write for this one.
    I will comment on another of your poems- hopefully i will be able to give a more detailed comment rather than just another bland "good job"
    Anyways I'm gonna stop blabbering :-)
    BTW. Is it possible to spell 'spiders' as 'spyders'?

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    dark...i like it!

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