awww this is very good Icant believe no one else has commented on it! Very nice! Keep it up! |
by Hannah
wow...great job...hope you're not thinking about suicide...I'm here if you need me!! 5/5 |
by *Sherrie*
This is really deep... but also very good... i truely hope this is just a poem... say true to you...Sherrie... |
So loving this poem... so much emotion and love.. oh so sad.. |
by bluehun
i liked that.it was good came from the heart,cheers for ya comments |
by shannon
wow...very very sad..you are very talented and i do hope that you continue to write |
by Andrea
amazing poem!! that was a little weird though when you mentioned my name...lol. |
by Luis Raymond
u are not gonna do it. .i know that. just forget me move on w/ ur life. .get a guy or something |
That was so sad! Hold your head up high though, there will e better days. You did a great job putting your thoughts into words. Keep writing and take care always! |
i love it plz comment on mine and keep up the good work |
great poem |
by creasy
that wassuch a great poem..keep ya head up and you'll make it through the tough times..keep up the great work..take care. be safe.. :) |
by Brookeღ
Very well written but I hope its not true! You will have that in life and sometimes it seems it will never get better but please hang in there! |
it was really good but really really sad too. but you know some times it just takes a little while for the things to get all better so just hold on. i hope you are ok. keep it up. good luck~!!~ |
by katie!
Amazing, WOW, Im actually in shock, great poem and what a great suicide letter it would be, not that you should commit suicide, Well done 5 |
by Emilia
Nice poem Jena.. keep it up =) |
wow....this is powerful stuff....if you ever need to talk, you can message me and I'll talk with ya.... |
you are a really good poet you have the emotionas that make it great good job |