by dragonfly
i like this poem alot although not as much as your other one. 4/5 |
by Lil Luce
wow liked how u related cutting to art, made it so visual! great work! |
by Amit
Great poem, impressively written. |
by Amanda
Oh sad poem but greatly written :) |
by cac123
this was so sad, but beatiful and it just is full of emotion and life. I loved it it flowed very well. |
really good nicly put xxxx |
by StormySkies
It's good. All of my poems on this subject are much more blunt. I love how you didn't come right out and say it. |
that was really nice...and super sad lol....but anyways...its another one i could relate to...once again...keep up the good work! |
by *liZ*
wow i really felt the emotion with this |
by VampyraKiâ€
how sad cool poem |
by Robert
The flow was off alot and there was no real cause to make you feel this hopeless I just felt nothing really. Maybe if you were to show me the pain instead of yust telling me it thats what could be missing... |
it was different, but great. I liked how drawing was your premis for cutting. It was a great poem, Im sorry that you cut though. Remember, if you ever need to talk, to vent, just IM me. 5/5 |