Minute Poem: Just One More Day

by ¤©h€€®ƒüll¥♥©¥ñ!c@l¤   Feb 21, 2005


Minute Poetry (From ShadowPoetry.com)
The Minute Poem is rhyming verse form consisting of 12 lines of 60 syllables written in strict
iambic meter. The poem is formatted into 3 stanzas of 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4 syllables.
The rhyme scheme is as follows: aabb, ccdd, eeff
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Scream my lungs out from frustration
Mutilation
Red tears I cried
Dying inside

Can’t be heard as much as I yell
A living hell
A life like this
Just hate, no bliss

Night after night I cry these tears
These teenage years
Stray and helpless
Just one more day

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This is my firswt attempt at this kind of poetry so please tell me what you think. ^_^

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  • 17 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    Excellent poem. I really enjoy minute poems, and I think you write them well. This is a beautiful poem

    I get the just of it but it was kind of hard to understand exactly what it was about. But all in all, it was great! Keep it up! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by happy days

    i think the style was great, u wrote it very well especially if it was your first go, i liked the owrd choice too, keep it up xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by ~DyingBlackRose~

    i think that it was good...keep it up

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