by Carmen Feb 22, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
I thought I could trust you, |
by LadyPearl
Nice poem, though some of the rhyming sounds forced. Keep it up |
by oldthings
Great poem and i relate to it too, well done, 5/5 =) |
by Jamie
I liked this but i think every single rhyme was completly forced, but other then the flow being a little weird i think this was a good poem imma give it a 4/5 but i love the way you write about things you really feel keep it up |
Really nice poem, I'm sorry if that happened to you. |
by x Saiya
Another great poem. I give it 5/5. I can relate, too, in a a way. Keep up your great work! |