Good poem. I know exactly what you mean.

5/5* AWW..that is terribly sad, but I loved it. good emotion keep it up!!!

read this one good job thank you

omg...such a good poem..and thanks by the way for commenting on mine...I really like this one..I cant really relate to it, because I cant say that I have lost trust in a friend before because I havent..and Im glad I havent because I wouldnt want to go throught all that.. Keep up the good work, girl..im here if you need to talk..just email me..

This is a great poem. I know exactly how you feel. It's sad to lose a friend, but sometimes you'll find better ones! :-)

trust is very important

I enjoyed it very much

I can relate very much to losing trust in a friendship. This poem was well written and the words flowed together nicely. Good work!

Losing a friendship is awful and you'll know when you find the right one just like i did and i wouldn't change her for the world! Great poem though. :)

awwww am so sorry i really hate broken friendships....i can relate to this poem .and am sure can many others....trust is key in any relationship and am sure u will find other people who you can trust and be there for you. such a beutiful poem take care.

Very well written and the flow never ceased... the words joined together perfectly like a marriage in heaven .... great job

--Sher

ahh tht's too bad..nad i have first hand experience on this matter...goes to show at the end of thr day the only person whom u can always fall back on is urself...nice write i gave it a 5:)

Your 14 right, well I don't know what to say, I guess you had a bad time with guys. I am sorry. the feeling I got from this says one word to me VICTEM!!
In order to be a better writer you must learn to think outside the box expand your mind and learn about the world. There is more to life then your love life open your eye there are issues you could write about beside love trust me on this expand your mind.

I sit and remember,
Our friendship so tender,
I never thought it could be ruined by anything,
But it ended up just like a summer fling.

that was my favourite stanza and i hope no one did destroy your trust like that and tell everyone your secrets because who ever it was doesnt deserve you as a friend you dont need someone like that but anyway it was a great poem!!!

Lucy***

Terrible when friends ditch your ass for something new.
Or break that bond of trust you share.
4/5

wow! excellent poem. its kinda what im goin thru too.

Again, nice poem with a good flow and natural rhyming sceme.
Well Done !!
xxx cici xxx

Kinda spelt scheme wrong... oh well i've never been good at spelling !!!

xxx cici xxx

This was ok...but nothing speciall about it...4/5

Wow that is awesome great job