by ¤©h€€®ƒüll¥♥©¥ñ!c@l¤ Feb 22, 2005
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Ethere Poetry (from shadowpoetry.com) |
by Minkus
Huh, interesting format, I'll have to try that. I do some haikus... u no, 5 syl, 7 syl, 5 syl. But this is different. Good job, btw. |
by creasy
nice poem!! keep it up!! :) |
by Amilo
It was good use of vividness in vocabulary and imagery, but not enough feeling or emotion put into it. Keep writing. |
by Leah20
That was really beautiful, keep up the awesome work! |
by Andrea
wow! amazing writing!!! |