I thought this was very good Amanda, I love the short lines creating suspense-5-God bless

-Heather M Craig-

Thank you so much! You are so sweet! I will read some of your poems, and comment! But thank you so much!
--Amanda

yourwelcome sweetheart, thank ya for the comment too! love HMC

For 3 minutes, that was awesome! It ususally takes me that long to write just a few lines! Bravo! lol well, if you get a chance, check out mine (no hurry though) keep it up!

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Thank you too! I will definately check out some of your poems, thanks for the comment!
--Amanda

"The eyes of the people"...interesting concept. I liked it a lot. I usually write in a darker, or more visionary tone, so it was a style I enjoyed a lot. If you get a chance, read some of my stuff, comments are always welcome. My older works are more like yours.

Brad