If I Were To Tell You...

by Bumble-Bee-xx   Feb 22, 2005


If i were to tell you that you were the one causing me pain,
would you stop?
If i were to tell you that i cried over you every night,
would you wipe my tears from my face?
If i were to tell you that i cut cause of you,
would you heal my cuts?
If i were to tell you that you were running through my mind,
would you walk instead of run?
If I were to tell you that cause of you i think about suicide,
would you wipe away my thoughts?
If i told you that my heart was broken,
would you glue the pieces back together?

NO, you kept causing me pain!
NO, you pealed onions in front of my eyes!
NO, you made the cuts deeper!
NO, you ran faster that ever!
NO, you made the thoughts come back!
NO, you torn my heart into the tiniest piece imaginable!

and all i can say is "i Love you and I'm not giving up"

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  • 19 years ago

    by Pianist

    How sad it is! I hope that this isn't true! If it is realize that this person is not worth it! You deserve better than that! Read some of my stuff if you ever get a chance.

  • 19 years ago

    by Joann

    i can relate to this.....i likes this poem...

  • 19 years ago

    by angelposer

    Wow... I like how you wrote this poem, really. Keep writing! Please check out my poems sometime too, k?

  • 19 years ago

    by Fatimah

    NO, you pealed onions in front of my eyes!

    Frankly that line made me laugh :D
    your poem was good, but I wonder, if that poem was true, and that person kept causing pain, making you cry, and thinking about suicide, does he deserve any tiny piece of your heart? uh, we girls are SO emotional :D

    Good luck!

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