by Steven
nice man! so nice |
This is really good and I can so relate to all you are saying as I (and I'm sure many others) have experienced/felt these same emotions/thoughts.Love can be such a double-edged sword, but what the heart knows today, the head will understand tomorrow.It is hard to force ourselves to move on though sometimes.Hope all works out well for you.This is expressed wonderfully with such emotion.Really, a great poem. |
by Jimmy Jr.
That was very moving to me thankz for commenting me that was very nice of you |
by Ariana
Very very sad. Theres a spelling error in the first line - 'fell' = 'feel.' I thought this sounded really heartfelt and you definately mean and have experienced what you write about. Nice job :) |
I really liked this and i think your talented..... |
I like your poem.....thanx for commenting me too |
by Bran
Hey i love this poem it is so cuite.. you commented on one of mine so i thought that i should. BUt yeh its really good and i love it!! |